Well i think you get the colors of the butterfly very well. Your focus is not exactly on the eyes but it still works.

The angle in this version is interessting - and the space on the right is perfect. Look like it will start in the next few sec.

The background is not the best - the bright areas are too much they take the attention from the butterfly and make the pic turbulent (sorry for my bad english )
And the Flower is outshined (too bright) but i know - a white flower ... in the sunlight ... is very hard to take Maybe you should here work with some umbrella or your body to spent shadow.

Well good work - but you can work a little bit on your technique